THIS is just utterly amazing! Total top shelf work in every imaginable way! You're a great writer and your gift sings out - even around the confines of fanfic - you've taken these charas, kept them IN chara and yet...made this unbelievable bit of erotic absolutly believable.
Lovely!!!!
This in particular -
He spun fantasies about those hands, and then let them go when it came time to engage in another heated debate about the Mayor, the Council, this or that translation. He'd thought nothing of his quiet fantasies. He'd always had them about someone, after all. It had been his way of escape, through years of lessons and college classes, when he'd been too focused on studying to properly fit in. It was locked up in his head, nothing he would act on, just quiet contemplation. Harmless, really.
was a flawless set-up for your story, making the Idea of it ring true. Wel done!
Thank you so much for taking the time to write this, polish it to a gleam and post it for the rest of us!!!
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Date: 2007-05-07 06:38 pm (UTC)THIS is just utterly amazing! Total top shelf work in every imaginable way! You're a great writer and your gift sings out - even around the confines of fanfic - you've taken these charas, kept them IN chara and yet...made this unbelievable bit of erotic absolutly believable.
Lovely!!!!
This in particular -
He spun fantasies about those hands, and then let them go when it came time to engage in another heated debate about the Mayor, the Council, this or that translation. He'd thought nothing of his quiet fantasies. He'd always had them about someone, after all. It had been his way of escape, through years of lessons and college classes, when he'd been too focused on studying to properly fit in. It was locked up in his head, nothing he would act on, just quiet contemplation. Harmless, really.
was a flawless set-up for your story, making the Idea of it ring true. Wel done!
Thank you so much for taking the time to write this, polish it to a gleam and post it for the rest of us!!!